Wednesday, May 25, 2011

.: day eleven :.


unrequited

I'm sorry you can't see the stars from where we are ; But at least we can still sit under the stainless moon ; Wishes can't be made tonight so I'll go back home, and make you a thousand cranes ; Tie each one on a string so they won't fly alone ; My hands are sore and bleeding, but for you I'll do anything ; Wishes can't be made tonight, and maybe I'll make cranes of my own ; And maybe, just maybe, you'll love me too.

4 comments:

  1. this is really sad and yet beautiful. its simple, short but it portrays the emotions splendidly. i love it!

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  2. this picture is really good....

    and ur lines.....re just wow....i especially love the way u ended the para...."And maybe, just maybe, you'll love me too."

    its really nicely written....almost moved me to tears...

    Mahmood

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    1. Awwwh thank you so much for the comment, Mahmood :) Glad I got to instill some emotion through this.

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